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Bloodthirster Comm: 3of3 pt2

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"Man, that was an awesome training session!" Cheered a light tan-furred cat as he pulled his blue sleeved white shirt over his head. As he tightened his belt around his black shorts, another voice spoke to him. "Definitely, Zip. But I just wish Shadz would stop training now so we can go home." Said a dark green fox who was known as the Chaotic Sage, but friends just called him Sage for short. "Hey, Shadz! You wanna wrap this up so we can go?" Sage called out as he straightened out his large black cape. Zip slipped his orange and white sneakers on and grabbed his black gloves, sliding them onto his hands as he approached the his friend, who was still training. "Shadz, come on! We've trained enough for the day."

"There's no such thing as 'enough' training. But I guess we can call it quits for the day." The black and gray fox sighed, dusting off his green pants with a blue waistband and blue stripes down each side. Being as pants were the only clothing Shadz wore besides a pair of green fingerless gloves, the fox was all ready to go. "'kay, guys. You know the drill: place your hands on my shoulders and let me concentrate." Zip and Sage each rested one hand on Shadz' shoulders, watching as the black fox closed his green and blue eyes and brought his left index and middle fingers to his forehead. Shadz possesses the ability to teleport anywhere, but only as long as he can see the destination clearly in his mind. Once Shadz' mind was fixated on the outside of his house, the three of them vanished into thin air.


*****Shadz' house, front door*****


"Alright...we're here..." Shadz said exhaustedly as the group appeared at his front door. He then dropped to one knee, sweat dripping from his green-dyed bangs. "Hey, you alright Shadz?" Zip asked, helping Sage get Shadz to his feet. "Yeah, I just used a lot of energy today. Not used to training and transporting three people at once. I'm good, though." The fox replied. Once he was back to his feet, Shadz noticed a piece of paper affixed to his front door. "Hm? What's this?" The fox pulled the note from his door and began to read aloud. The message read:


Dear Shadz,

Halee, Tia and I are a little "tied up" right now, but we'll see you guys when you get home. Love ya lots!

~Vixie <3



Shadz was too tired to notice the quotation marks around the words "tied up", so he just figured the girls were busy inside. He took his keys out of his pocket, inserted one into the lock and turned the knob. Upon opening the door all three boys were most confused by the sight in front of them: each one of their girlfriends lay hogtied on the floor and gagged with duct tape, groaning softly into their gags as they wriggled in their bonds. "Tia!" Zip shouted as he ran over to his girlfriend. Sage made his way over to Halee as Shadz knelt down besides Vixie. "Halee, who did this to you!?" Sage asked, forgetting she was gagged. Halee only replied with an annoyed "Grrmmphh...", jerking her head towards Vixie and Tia as she flexed her feet, the duct tape around her toes making a crinkling noise. Sage looked over at Shadz, who was removing the duct tape from Vixie's mouth.

"Vixie...did you have something to do with this?" Vixie giggled softly, shyly curling her toes as she said "Yeah...but it was Tia's idea!" Tia's head snapped over in Halee's direction and she responded with a muffled "Hggnyy!" Shadz turned back to the bound vixen in front of him and said "Wait right here.", sealing the duct tape back over her lips. "Like I have a choi-mmphh!" Shadz looked at Zip and Sage and said "Guy talk. Now." The girls watched curiously as their loves quietly conversed with one another. "So what's going on here, Shadz? Who  did this, are why aren't we out there looking for them?" Shadz sighed and said "Look, no one did this to them. They did it themselves. Guess I shouldn't have taught Vixie about this stuff, even though it was for training purposes."

"But why would they do this? Not that I'm complaining or anything." Zip laughed. Sage just facepalmed and asked "So they just wanted to trick us for leaving them alone all day?" Shadz nodded, then came up with an idea. "Well, since they wanted to trick us, I say we make it backfire on them..." Both Zip ans Sage looked at Shadz and said "What do you mean?" The black fox had a mischeivious smile on his face as he said "Well, knowing Vixie, she tied the girls and herself so well that they can't get out on their own, which works to our advantage. I say we have a little...'fun' with them." Zip was visibly excited about the idea, but Sage wasn't so sure. "Well..." he started. "...Halee did trick me...alright, I'll go along. Though I know she's gonna kill me afterward."

"Alright, then...let's have our fun." Shadz chuckled. All three boys turned to the girls on the floor as Shadz began to speak. "Well, ladies...good news. We're gonna untie you." The trio of bound girls released a collective sigh of relief as best they could from behind their gags. But Shadz wasn't done yet. "But the bad news is...we're gonna get a little revenge on you for tricking us first." The girls' reply to this was a simultaneous "Hhmphh!?", followed by frantic thrashing and fighting against the ropes that held them. The girls watched helplessly as the guys approached them: Shadz to Vixie, Zip to Tia, and The Chaotic Sage to Halee. "Well, Tia..." Zip began. "I've actually been wanting to do this for a while now..."

"Whggnt?" Tia half-shouted as she felt something wet touch the soles of her paws. The white vixen tried her best to resist, but it was no use, her paws were at Zip's mercy as he dragged his tongue across his girlfriend's soles from toe to heel, and heel to toe. Meanwhile, Shadz was preparing his own 'punishment' for Vixie, kneeling down behind her and grabbing the roll of duct tape. "Alright, Vixie. I think it's only fair to secure you just as you did the others." The black fox took some duct tape from the roll and wrapped Vixie's big toes, keeping them firmly locked in place. He then placed his fingers on her soles, just under her toes and began to tickle her helpless paws. "Mmphh! Phlggzhe!" The vixen pleaded as her sensitive footpaws were mercilessly tickled. "Sorry, Vix. But you were asking for it." Shadz smiled as he continued.

The Chaotic Sage looked down at Halee, and she returned his look with an angered expression that said 'Don't even think about it'. "Sorry about this, Halee...but you did kinda trick us..." Sage said as he turned his back and began swishing his tail across Halee's paws. "Mmpphh!!" the hedgehog shouted as she felt the tip of Sage's tail dancing gently underneath and between her toes, which were flexing and curling frantically from the tickling sensation. 'I didn't even have anything to do with it!' Halee screamed in her head as her paws were tickled all over by her boyfriend's fluffy tail.

After nearly 20 minutes (and one soaked pair of paws for Tia) later, Shadz spoke out and said "Well, guys? You think the girls have learned their lesson?" Zip and Sage both nodded as all three boys removed the duct tape from the girls' mouths, each one taking a deep breath of relief. Shadz began to untie Vixie, as well as Zip and Sage untying Tia and Halee. Once the girls were free, Shadz gave Vixie a playful punch to the arm and said "Didn't know I knew your tickle spots, did ya?" Vixie blushed a little, hugging Shadz and said "Eh...I had a feeling you did." Sage was staring over at his friends until a swift slap to the back of the head caught his attention. "Ow! What the hell was that for!?" Halee just stood there, arms crossed and tapping her foot on the floor. "Oh...yeah." was all the green fox could say as he rubbed the back of his head.

"Don't worry, Zip." Tia said, smiling. "I'm not gonna hit ya, I actually enjoyed it. But there is something you guys could do for us to make it up to us." Zip, as well as everyone else, turned their attention to the white fox girl. "I think it's only fair that you boys let us girls tie you up now. I promise we won't be too rough." Zip shrugged and said "Well, fair is fair, I guess. What do you guys say?" Shadz was pretty neutral about the whole situation, but Sage wasn't too crazy about it. "I dunno, I'm not really into being tied up..." He started, before he was tripped by Halee and felt his arms pulled behind him by the blue hedgie. Within a matter of seconds, the green fox was securely hogtied, bound hands to feet, with his big toes tied and duct tape wrapped around his mouth and the back of his head. Halee stood up and said "I'm not either, but I am into revenge."

Everyone else just looked in shock as Halee walked over to the door and slipped on her shoes. "Well, I guess we're in, then." Shadz sighed, sitting on the floor in front of Vixie. Zip did the same, but before anything else could happen, Tia grabbed Zip's feet, pulling off his shoes and socks revealing the cat's tan paws with pink pawpads. She tackled him to the ground and grabbed a few bunches of rope, and in true cartoon style, a large cloud of dust engulfed them. Once the dust cleared, Zip lay heavily hogtied on the floor, all fours bound behind him, his arms tied closely together at the elbows, and his big toes tied together and up to his arm ropes. This caused Zip's feet to be pulled forward, keeping his soles pointed forward and his toes pointed skyward. His mouth was also sealed with duct tape.

"Oh, boy..." Shadz sighed, for he knew what was in store for him. Vixie spent a few minutes trying various rope techniques Shadz had taught her, and once she was finished, the black fox was definitely not going anywhere anytime soon. Much like the other boys, Shadz hands and feet were tied behind him, but his hands were pinned underneath his heels, preventing him from reaching any of the ropes that held him. His arms were tied at the elbows, his legs above and below the knees, ans even his big toed and soles had been wrapped in rope. Just as Vixie was about to place the duct tape over Shadz' muzzle, Halee intervened.

"Hold on, Vixie. I think since this was Shadz' idea, he deserves some special treatment..." The blue hedgehog picked up a coil of rope and wrapped it around Shadz' mouth a few times, passing it between his teeth to where the fox couldn't wiggle it loose. Once the rope was secure, Halee took some more rope and tied it to the ropes already trapping Shadz' feet, and tied it to the back of the ropes around his head. She made sure to pull all of the slack out of the rope, which forced the black fox's head back and arched his body slightly. She then tied it off and finished up with several layers of duct tape, making sure Shadz was completely silenced. "Mmphh! Mm HMPHH!!" Shadz protested, but the fox could hardly move a muscle, let alone object. After observing their handiwork, the girls made their way to the front door.

"Okay, boys. We're going shopping for a few hours, we'll be back around dinnertime." Vixie smiled as she slipped her shoes on. This caused an angered "WHGGNT!?" from the boys, who struggled in vain to free themselves. Halee taunted them by saying "Maybe a few hours at least...we're gonna try on things...lots of things." As Halee and Vixie walked out the door, Tia gave the bound boys one last grin and said "See you guys in a while...and then we can have our fun! Later!" She then shut the door behind her, the slam feeling like a prison cell door to the boys who now lie helpless on the floor. They each looked at one another, save for Shadz who couldn't even turn his head. They had no choice but to wait out the time until their loves returned. Safe to say Zip, Shadz, and the Chaotic Sage all learned a valuable lesson today...don't mess with the girls.


....The End.
Part one: [link]


My hands feel like they're gonna fall off... *dies*

Anyway, her's the final commission for *bloodthirster. Before you say anything, NO, I am not breaking the promise made in my journal. Commissions will be the exception to that. And also, this was requested before I made that promise. Anyhoo, here's part 2 of *bloodthirster's final commission. I made this last one into two part to thank him for being so patient with me taking so long. Thanks again for commissioning me, bro. And I look forward to doing business with you again. :)

Zip and Tia are © to :iconbloodthirster:
Halee is © to :iconlongmane:
Vixie is © to :iconvixiereynard:
The Chaotic Sage is © to :iconbwarch: (I know him outside dA)

Shadz and story are © to me.
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it is all great!nice work i felt like i was there.